Samar TS #9

 Date: 7/31/25

Location: Zoom

Topic/Skill: Body Paragraph 

Feedback: I taught Hyobin the layout of a body paragraph for both informative and argumentative essays. I also taught her how to look for evidence and explain the evidence. To test her understanding, I had her order sentences from a body paragraph (twice, one for argumentative and one for informative). At the end, she wrote her own body paragraph. I gave her feedback while she ordered the sentences for the body paragraph and while writing her own paragraph. While she was writing on her own, I focused on giving her feedback on explaining her evidence, since that was an aspect she showed some confusion with. 

Lessons learned: I learned that some EFL students might need more support with understanding the structure of essay writing. Examples are important because you can show them an outline of a writing format, but it won’t make sense until they see what you taught in use (or in context). 

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